Review request.
You used screen shots of flash instead of only text, and you used examples of a moving sprite. The whole thing was very succinct, it didn't leave people guessing what they have to do. Overall: Good job! I can't really say much on how to improve.
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Overall, it was a nice flash. The art style was interresting and the story was touching. There was just one little thing that was wrong with it, the sound fluxed between loud and soft, so it was kind of hard to understand some of it.
None the less, it was great.
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Please,
Please, for gods sake take your mouth away from the mic when you talk, all I got was the word "retard" a bunch of times and fuzz. The animation wasn't good either, there was no lip syniching, just a loop of a block expanding and going back to normal. As for the graphics, they were just bad, it was text, and a blue backround, and a few boxes. Plus, everything was tweened.
Whatever. I don't think you understand that I don't want advice on how to talk to the friggen mic. I didn't do it my brother talks to close to the mic.
I didn't like it.
To be totally honest, it sucked.
The very small amount of actuall animation was just terrible. I could barely understand the voices, take your mouth away from the microphone when you talk. There were very basic graphics, it was just text, a few lines, and the brush tool.
Work on this more. 0/5 from me.
Fine screw you
Well...
It was an ok submission, it could use some work though. Like for one, it was very choppy. Also, the voices were kind of annoying, how old are you? You sound 11 or something. Anyway, just make it smoother, and consider using voice actors.
I was eleven, or just 12 i can't remember. My voice sounded a lot higher pitched then, and it sounds higher pitched on the microphone for some weird reason.
I'm almost 13 now, and I'm gonna make way better ones with loads o' violence and stuff. This one was for a school project, that's why it was so kiddy.
Nice one!
I have no idea why this is only at 2.74, I thought it would at least get a 3 or higher, the graphics of the characters were great, and I got all of the jokes. Please make a sequal!
Hilarious
I love these parodies, I've been watching them since A.C. 1 was about to pass judgement! Also, the Animal Crossing one is so true.
Well now...
You were just taking the german version and putting words in as what they sounded in engilsh, I can speak german and I could translate some of the words, it was saying it too fast for me to understand most of it but... "whore-a" is Uhr, which means clock, "dick" is dich, which means you in the context of the sentence it was in. Those were just examples, you over emphasized what they really sounded like in most parts.
And as for the flash, it was just text, which you probably copied this whole idea from a video or another website, and just put it as text over a song, which I hate, please try to do a real animation next time.
Awesome!
That was pure amazing, it will no doubt make front page in a second.
woot XD thanks for the review, hope it does
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